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Monday 8 April 2019

Advice for writers: How to write conflict and make it real. Celia Moore offers advice… @rararesources @celiamoorebooks #romance #mystery #writingtip #authortip #writerslife #mustread #fiction



Writing Conflict



by

Celia Moore

     



I had a scene in my first draft of my novel Fox Halt Farm where one character needed to confront another, which my wonderful editor Amanda Horan gently suggested needed overhauling.



In truth, I am a person who runs away from conflict, ducking my head, sliding away from my challenger, or at worst, becoming a blubbering ball of regret. My original story was full of love with the repercussions of betrayal and lies neatly skipped over.



In fact, when I rewrote the scene, I actually enjoyed the experience and felt my book became so much stronger because of the stand-off I created, and the tension it evoked.


Case Study: I am not going to use ‘real’ characters here because the scene in Fox Halt Farm that I am critiquing comes late in the story and although there is forewarning the confrontation should be unexpected.  It is brought about when ‘Anne’ (not her name) finds out that the admirable ‘David’ has been lying to her. These are a few of the elements that I used to make the conflict between them real.



·       The two characters had different objectives which really mattered to them.

·       Normally, Anne would be passive and David an aggressor, but Anne’s distress brought about by David’s deceit gives her energy and determination enough to stand up to him. She also uses an element of surprise to try and even the difference in their power levels. She is surprisingly confident when the reader knows that David will be a difficult adversary.

·       Anne confronts David in a place where their conflicting differences have to be resolved there and then, neither party wants to walk away.

·       This scene is needed to reinforce David’s true nature to the readers – up until this point he had seemed benevolent. It is used to identify David’s priorities too. The conflict was required to split these two characters up permanently. Lastly, I wanted the tension to build and continue.

·       David’s business, personal and family life are all at risk.

·       Anne is conflicted, trying to fight but being naturally tearful when angry, and losing self control. She struggles with her emotions, exploding violently at one point. David, in contrast is mainly in control of all his actions, using his intellect to outmanoeuvre Anne, building emotional friction.

·       Anne keeps being knocked down but gets back up ready to fight each time.

·       David has arguments to endorse his behaviour but he also uses his superior physical strength too. Demonstrating to the reader how passionate he is about defending himself.

·       I wrote the conflict through dialogue to display contempt, revenge and hatred, which I interspersed with physical actions. I wanted to provide the reader with visual detail to enhance their understanding of their differing levels of emotion, and the challenges Anne and David faced.

·       I created a dilemma for Anne to worry the reader, aware of her frailty – at this point she seems to have lost the battle – but eventually she manages to use this predicament to her advantage.

·       I wrote from Anne’s perspective allowing her to analyse each of David’s moves, making decisions to beat him – but each time David reacts cleverly to test her again.

·       The conflict ends in an impasse – Anne has lost and regrets the confrontation, fearing it will make things worse for her, but this argument will have repercussions for David too, this is not a definite victory for him.

·       Anne’s grief and need for healing overwhelms her – she sees things in a new way , leaving readers anticipating what will happen next.



This is not meant as a definitive ‘how to’, I am far too self-conflicted to think I know it all. I still have lots to learn but I hope this gives some ideas, maybe there is something here that you can use too?



*****My sequel to Fox Halt Farm, Culmfield Cuckoo has just been published, and I really loved writing the conflict elements in this new novel.*****

   
INTRODUCING…
Culmfield Cuckoo
by
Celia Moore
When Billy reaches out to help, her kindness brings many changes which threaten hopes, homes, and even the people she loves the most.
Who is the Culmfield Cuckoo?
Will they help Billy get her life back? Or is the Cuckoo the cause of everything that is going wrong?
Who is telling the truth?

FOX HALT FARM by Celia Moore is the first book in the series, and Fox Halt Farm is FREE from Tuesday 2nd April 12am PDT finishing on Saturday 6th 11.59pm PDT.
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About the author.

Celia Moore (1967-now) grew up on a small farm near Exeter. She had a successful career as a Chartered Surveyor working in the City of London before working her way back to Devon. In 2000, she left the office to start a new adventure as an outdoor instructor, teaching rock climbing and mountaineering. 

Today she gardens for a few lovely customers, runs and writes (accompanied at all times by a border terrier x jack russell called Tizzy). She is running the London Marathon in April 2019 for three cancer charities.

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